I managed to get feedback from most of the organisations about the script. I also asked other people I knew working in Mental Health and some people who have a mental health illness. I sent out a document which contained all the feedback and a questionnaire form to the organisations. I am meeting with several people locally to discuss the feedback. The script was successful and most people liked it and thought it was much darker and showed psychosis really well. One organisation thought that the script was not as positive in the recovery part compared to the first script.
I intend taking on board everyones comments and using this feedback to enhance and improve the script. I am also aware that I need to be careful as I am never going to please everyone and this animation is most importantly about part of my journey which is unique to me.